Re-read. While the unofficial translation was full of grammatical errors, I think it was slightly superior to the official translation. The official translation changed some minor details to connect to an international audience. That being said, I also noticed that the original scanlation has been removed or uploaded over, which is a shame as it gave notes and cute translator reactions to the storyline.
As for the story itself -- too short. Juheon forgave Kang way too easily. Kang should definitely thank Muchan for being tsundere/yandere type toward Juheon and tried to use the sister to trap him. Forcing Juheon back into Kang's arms. Instead I wished Muchan would have changed since HS and seriously sought a real relationship with Juheon and challenging Kang's right to be back in Juheon and Taeyang's life. Kang barely repented, still struggles with trusting Juheon, but he still won in the end using his family's money and power.
Re-read. While the unofficial translation was full of grammatical errors, I think it was slightly superior to the official translation. The official translation changed some minor details to connect to an international audience. That being said, I also noticed that the original scanlation has been removed or uploaded over, which is a shame as it gave notes and cute translator reactions to the storyline.
As for the story itself -- too short. Juheon forgave Kang way too easily. Kang should definitely thank Muchan for being tsundere/yandere type toward Juheon and tried to use the sister to trap him. Forcing Juheon back into Kang's arms. Instead I wished Muchan would have changed since HS and seriously sought a real relationship with Juheon and challenging Kang's right to be back in Juheon and Taeyang's life. Kang barely repented, still struggles with trusting Juheon, but he still won in the end using his family's money and power.