Within 3 chapters only, there are quite a few obvious and annoying holes in the writing. And It has nothing to do with anything being lost in translation. It's not the worst but it certainly breaks immersion every time and it's quite annoying after awhile. Really not a fan of that. Doesn't feel like a typical rushed thing either, because the author watsed so much time on other stuff they could have easily cut that these holes stand out even more so.
I hope this doesn't keep happening because breaking immersion every chapter is really not making this a pleasant read.
The base plot is super interesting, tho the MC's personality is pretty trashy, so I really want to keep reading this. (Might want to wait for official translations tho, not sure.)
Within 3 chapters only, there are quite a few obvious and annoying holes in the writing. And It has nothing to do with anything being lost in translation.
It's not the worst but it certainly breaks immersion every time and it's quite annoying after awhile. Really not a fan of that.
Doesn't feel like a typical rushed thing either, because the author watsed so much time on other stuff they could have easily cut that these holes stand out even more so.
I hope this doesn't keep happening because breaking immersion every chapter is really not making this a pleasant read.
The base plot is super interesting, tho the MC's personality is pretty trashy, so I really want to keep reading this. (Might want to wait for official translations tho, not sure.)