This is the first story of this author that made say a "hold on girlll wait" out loud cause I felt like we jumped from chap 4 to the end of 5 The pacing was too fast in chapter 5, like it's okay to do more than 6 chaps to keep the same pacing of the story from beginning to end.
Honestly relationships that touch the theme of sex workers need a steady pacing and really good building. This was doing so great but chapter 5 was like a splash lmao. After so many bangers, a flop story is nothing I guess
This is the first story of this author that made say a "hold on girlll wait" out loud cause I felt like we jumped from chap 4 to the end of 5
The pacing was too fast in chapter 5, like it's okay to do more than 6 chaps to keep the same pacing of the story from beginning to end.
Honestly relationships that touch the theme of sex workers need a steady pacing and really good building. This was doing so great but chapter 5 was like a splash lmao.
After so many bangers, a flop story is nothing I guess