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def loose ended

icecoffee1111 May 9, 2024 10:28 pm

1. the queen, she was a "scary villian" but she gave up pretty quickly and quietly like girl was like kay i dont actually have much pull myself all my brother but then the brother also doesnt have much pull in the family so like who was the ringleader. idk i just feel like the villains were not very villainy
2. the cloak guy what was his deal like (〜 ̄△ ̄)〜
3. i dont think gerald was that bad like sure he did stuff but it could have been worse
4. the magic system? so like only one person has magic but then there is also other races of ppl like the world is not very built, and the more i think about it the more strange it is like what is up with that, you would think there would be more talk about magic when they had wars going on
5. dont like how i will never know what happens between raya and the purple haired girl (sorry forget her name)
6. i. enjoyed geralds and oscars "friendship" to much for it to end with them apart. like if you can forgive the queen let oscar and gerald be free too.
7. the couple was cute but the fl was kind of airheaded and like too airheaded for her big age. the ml is supposed to be the strongest swordsmen but he's kind of weak no?
8. the ages of gerald and oscar and the queen. i assumed that the queen was around 40 so gerald and oscar i think are older then her so they are also 40ish so the plotline of oscar liking fl is weird bcs he is like 20 years older then her right?!
9. lastly noah was annoying as hell, he didnt help at all but just added to the fire. like buddy ( ̄へ ̄)

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