Does this have bad translation?

i don't think it's bad

Is the best out there? Not really. Is it bad? I wouldn't say so, either. It's pretty mid in terms of translations I've seen. If one is new to murim/wuxia stories I wouldn't recommend reading this yet, as some things I know from the context of other stories I've read and can guess what terms are being referred to even if they don't use the same words.