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otakumalade May 19, 2024 11:31 pm

There's potential. Execution could be better but the one thing that I think is unfortunate is the sex part ( ̄∇ ̄"). Story would be better without it
FMC as a character: love her 8/10 but ml not really a fan.
Like I feel like they do it every 10 chaps and it kinda make me uncomfortable because there's clearly an imbalance of power especially at the beginning. fucking and not holding hands or at the very most a .kiss no she needs to fuck him when she just came back from the most traumatizing and terrifying experiences u could through.
Idk maybe I'm naive but I would've liked it more if they were forced to hold hands or something in the beginning and then when they like each other they initiate physical contact and all the other shit couples do when they fall in love. Thought it would be cute.
Maybe I'm reaching. Idk. ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭

At this point I'm here for that piece of shit downfall and his bumass babymama. Knew she was trouble the second I saw those ugly ass curls.

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