Chp 17 putting aside the tropes and cliche i'm liking this so far BUT i think it has 2 fatal flaws that just boils my blood Why is she so disrespectful when talking about the ml beliefs of waiting until marriage. I get that it sounds very unreal for a hot shot like him not to be exercising his lower half left to right, but at this point in the story it's seems pretty evident how serious and clear his point sands on. So her getting all bratty and telling him to his face that he must be joking, just comes off as rude and insensitive. And clearly undermining her own arguments 2nd: all the -from overnight i became a nonogamist- seems like bs. Like yeah we get it, it left a big scar how her last relationship ended + her own traumas, but it really seems absurd how she is acting at the moment (like miss girly do you not one bit of dignity left) i mean if her trauma was such a big of a deal, why didn't she have this kind of worries in her last realtionship. And i found the mc a bit unlikeable, he thoughts and actions contradict constantly, but well this whole plot is a trope(〜￣△￣)〜
Chp 17 putting aside the tropes and cliche i'm liking this so far BUT i think it has 2 fatal flaws that just boils my blood
Why is she so disrespectful when talking about the ml beliefs of waiting until marriage. I get that it sounds very unreal for a hot shot like him not to be exercising his lower half left to right, but at this point in the story it's seems pretty evident how serious and clear his point sands on. So her getting all bratty and telling him to his face that he must be joking, just comes off as rude and insensitive. And clearly undermining her own arguments
2nd: all the -from overnight i became a nonogamist- seems like bs. Like yeah we get it, it left a big scar how her last relationship ended + her own traumas, but it really seems absurd how she is acting at the moment (like miss girly do you not one bit of dignity left) i mean if her trauma was such a big of a deal, why didn't she have this kind of worries in her last realtionship.
And i found the mc a bit unlikeable, he thoughts and actions contradict constantly, but well this whole plot is a trope(〜￣△￣)〜