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Bro I can't with this story 😭 U can be silly and fun but it brushes over the biggest pl...

Meow May 20, 2024 2:39 pm

Bro I can't with this story
U can be silly and fun but it brushes over the biggest plot point like crazy. She LITTERALLY learned all the abuse she went through and same with the other girl was because of a mistake of another person and she brushes past that. Also after the beginning of the story she never starts to worry about her past life and career OR ANYTHING for that matter in her original body. Like she was never stressed, cried, or gotten angry in her hard situation.

An author can make it a comedy but sit have hard hitting, serious plot points. This is just terrible writing bro

Responses
    GISS23 May 20, 2024 7:38 pm

    I think she might being feeling like whatever happened has happened but lets make do with the situation that she is in now. She was abused and she became strong in her previous life due to it. So now she is mentally strong enough to handle the situation.

    Azazel_ May 22, 2024 11:57 am

    There was a line she said 'her old name/identity seems a little unfamiliar to her after the body change'. So I guess it makes sense to brush past that. But I agree with you, definitely can be showed better way :)

    Meow May 23, 2024 8:33 am
    I think she might being feeling like whatever happened has happened but lets make do with the situation that she is in now. She was abused and she became strong in her previous life due to it. So now she is men... GISS23

    I get this but I can't agree completely because she started crying at one point because she was welcomed home by her new family. Even if she is strong, it still obviously effects her. So it becomes even more unnatural

    GISS23 May 23, 2024 1:26 pm
    I get this but I can't agree completely because she started crying at one point because she was welcomed home by her new family. Even if she is strong, it still obviously effects her. So it becomes even more un... Meow

    Well, the story is still ongoing so lets wait to see any development on this factor

    Meow May 24, 2024 4:07 am
    Well, the story is still ongoing so lets wait to see any development on this factor GISS23

    True true