I'll bet on this but the story is kinda fucked up. The story progression is advanced and is taking events too quickly. And what's with the plot? Yes there's no mistaking that the point here is them fighting for their love over fate. It's something you won't find everyday. But was it worth it? When the alpha is fighting against his instincts, is he able to resist it the second time around? What'll happen to the side alpha? If he gets to meet his fated mate is he able to resist it? It'll drive him crazy I bet. Maybe he'll be able to resist if his love for the Hikaru(side omega) is strong enough, but who knows? I feel like everything in this story is forcedly hurried. The characters' role feels like it was dumped by the author unto them in a hurry. The Alpha was forced into being a bottom, the omega is manipulative, the side characters feels like they were forced to admit especially the bottom. But honestly, it's has a good plot, it just needs greater detail. Hands up on people who cried when Kaede almost mated Hikaru:'( and Asuza, what'll happen to him.
I'll bet on this but the story is kinda fucked up. The story progression is advanced and is taking events too quickly. And what's with the plot? Yes there's no mistaking that the point here is them fighting for their love over fate. It's something you won't find everyday. But was it worth it? When the alpha is fighting against his instincts, is he able to resist it the second time around? What'll happen to the side alpha? If he gets to meet his fated mate is he able to resist it? It'll drive him crazy I bet. Maybe he'll be able to resist if his love for the Hikaru(side omega) is strong enough, but who knows? I feel like everything in this story is forcedly hurried. The characters' role feels like it was dumped by the author unto them in a hurry.
The Alpha was forced into being a bottom, the omega is manipulative, the side characters feels like they were forced to admit especially the bottom. But honestly, it's has a good plot, it just needs greater detail. Hands up on people who cried when Kaede almost mated Hikaru:'( and Asuza, what'll happen to him.