Trump is that you???
Well first of all the text dialogues are too long, your going to bore a reader to death by making someone read all that information when the plot isn't even appealing and quite frankly boring
Predictable, cliche characters, I wasn't invested in the characters whatsoever and did not cared what happened to them. Comedy (if there even was any) was bad and unnecessary sex scenes were added to make this shit yaoi "good"
You try to draw an write a yaoi manga then ;)
I laughed so fucking hard at this hahahaa
Bad.