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Somehow rushed and some parts were unnecessary

UzuHanabi May 23, 2024 4:07 pm

I'm kind of dissaponted ar the excursión of the lastest chapter, N° 9.
We were waiting for the making up and then their first time for a while, and when they do it the author drops a backstory that is suposed to be emocional but it ended up out of nowhere, as far as I remember there were no hints of the knowing each other before, so it feels misplaced. Also, the plotwist that indicates that the Kyoujima's was the one that sent the picture was so unsatisfing, way out of chsracter. It felt like the author wanted to give a Wow moment and felt very cheap. I think the chapter would have been a Lot more appeling if the took more time with the foreplay and making the penetration Even more intenso/emphazied, and Maje the the childhood reveal in the the next chapter with more time to breath.

Don't get me wrong, I liked a Lot the story and got attached to these silly Guys, but this chapter was lacking for me. (づ ̄ ³ ̄)づ

Responses
    Luisidu97 May 24, 2024 2:37 am

    There was a hint ay ch 4 i guess, when they studied together for the first time and he said something like "I knew it, you're still pretty good at teaching" and the other guy just looked confused because he said "still". But yeah, I agree with you hahaha

    All Hail Yato May 24, 2024 3:47 pm
    There was a hint ay ch 4 i guess, when they studied together for the first time and he said something like "I knew it, you're still pretty good at teaching" and the other guy just looked confused because he sai... Luisidu97

    i am aware about that hint too. At that time i was thought they were met before but the MC did not remember it, and it turns out they had met when they were still a child.

    All Hail Yato May 24, 2024 3:48 pm

    That plot twist part, Yeah same here, I do think the part where the ML is the one who harasses him is a bit off to me. It is so ooc and inconsistent with what already developed imo.
    For me, I would be more satisfied if the one who harasses him is a complete stranger.
    But yeah, it's just me spouting my thoughts as a reader. The real deal is still the author who holds it - it's their work, so I was like Yeah thanks for the food. And beautiful art though! <3