The pacing is a lil funky at times BUT its really not bad at all, and the flow of the scenes actually feel pretty good! Mc has such a silly lighthearted personality so far, i cant wait to see more of his interactions with ML! Idk i feel like this story has a lot of potential just from how compelling the first few chapters are so far, excited for more!!!
The pacing is a lil funky at times BUT its really not bad at all, and the flow of the scenes actually feel pretty good! Mc has such a silly lighthearted personality so far, i cant wait to see more of his interactions with ML! Idk i feel like this story has a lot of potential just from how compelling the first few chapters are so far, excited for more!!!