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I like it a lot! The writing was lackluster and the author could have done a way better jo...

narutolvr March 21, 2017 3:23 am

I like it a lot! The writing was lackluster and the author could have done a way better job setting the scene, but the emotions you see in the last 5 pages or so just scream at you they're so real and so painful. I wish the author had at least another 2 pages to properly paint the picture of this dysfunctional relationship we see brewing on the last page. At the very least, we need one more page to show her being ensnared by him when considering breaking things off. I also like that the author left us guessing when it came to how he felt- did he actually like her and just couldn't control himself when she asked for more? Or does he just not want to risk losing an interesting sex friend? Either way, it's got that realness to it a lot of other manga are missing- including a lot of yaoi.

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