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"The Thing" but with more tentacle sex and less gory body-horror

Kachan113 September 2, 2024 8:30 pm

A simple smut BL with some nice tentacle sex scenes ( Short story, complete with 6 chapter. ). A sort of tentacle porn version of John Carpenter' The Thing, but without the gory body-horror sadly ( Would have been interesting to see this in a R-18 yaoi ^^. ).

The author should have read a little bit more about Antarctica weather, and watch some reel/short made by actual scientist who work in the bases however. She/he would have avoided some stupid error, like a classical alternation of night and day ( It's an all day/all night country, like the northest part of Arctic... If you are curious, search about the Svalbard archipelago for exemple ^^. ). Also the clothes choice aren't good. It's the coldest and windiest place on Earth, you cant' go outside with nothing on your neck sweeties :3. Especially if you set-up your story in winter.
Also, it's would have been better if the author have used some realistic background, and not the sci-fi ones you can find on Acon3D. I think these kind of stories are better when the visual around the character are mundane and logical. Fear and weirdness feeling work better ^^.

Responses
    OxU September 11, 2024 11:48 am

    So it wasn’t just me. I was reading this like “isn’t this The Thing but yaoi mpreg??”

    Kachan113 September 12, 2024 4:41 pm
    So it wasn’t just me. I was reading this like “isn’t this The Thing but yaoi mpreg??” OxU

    Yes, that totally a yaoi mpreg version of the Thing ^^.