Great idea and good potential but there was not enough story to flesh it out. It needed at least 5 more chapters because there is a lot to explain and so many different routes to take with the idea of a tribe of mineral eating people.
Great idea and good potential but there was not enough story to flesh it out. It needed at least 5 more chapters because there is a lot to explain and so many different routes to take with the idea of a tribe of mineral eating people.