Wow this is like the first chapter I've enjoyed reading from this story for a long time now. I like how it leans into the darker side of the mc personality (using his dead friend as a shield + liking someone who he knows is a bad person). The ml's development was set up nicely, although I doubt the execution will be as good. Mc is also starting to lean away from ml and the chasing arc should begin soon.
I think the plot is really interesting, there's just so many useless stuff in between, with sex being one of those. So I'm hoping that this story reaches at least some of the potential it has
Wow this is like the first chapter I've enjoyed reading from this story for a long time now. I like how it leans into the darker side of the mc personality (using his dead friend as a shield + liking someone who he knows is a bad person). The ml's development was set up nicely, although I doubt the execution will be as good. Mc is also starting to lean away from ml and the chasing arc should begin soon.
I think the plot is really interesting, there's just so many useless stuff in between, with sex being one of those. So I'm hoping that this story reaches at least some of the potential it has