Really? I think it's one of the BEST written. Weird.
I think it's a little haphazard since the tone of it went from serious to now just comedy. With the mafia theme the author is trying to fit in both so it's a little messy.
I think the presentation is definitely pretty messy basically. I was very confused with all these characters coming up because they were introduced in a weird manner. And then you suddenly find out that they're part of the mafia aspect. The first few chapters or so were good and followed a sense of flow in storyline but then the recent ones suddenly jump around too much to follow what's happening
Wow...."best" written. It's not even well-written, what makes you think it can be "one of the best" written? You must have not read many mangas before...or you just don't have any sense.
This plot. .
It's written very clumsily
But the last sentence lol "Song Zhao why do you turn so fucking crazy at night"