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Yes, totally. Especially with the first one, the guy who rape Chris in the Chapter 3, and the mecano. Erik has so much opportunity to stop them before they try to assault Chris ( Naively I was thinking the mecano was killed just after we witness him masturbate ^^;. ), so it's really weird he just... well came after and play the nice guy ^^;.

Perhaps if the author have use a little less panel to show how every males in this story want the ass of the heros, and how the consent of the heros aren't their first concern ; and more time to actually build up the relationship between Chris and Eirik and make it beliveable I would have enjoyed more the sex scene between them ==.
Why the inconstancy in the character of Chris, why the story try that much to make us believe Eirik is a green flag who only want the best for his fated pair ( You have litterally try to waterboarding him the chapter before, come on man == ! ) ; why the weird hornyness, why being afraid of some useless BDSM gear when the guy who use it just... don't know... try to fucking killing you a moment before == ? Bruh.