The story was really good for the first half, pacing wise, then all they did was go at it like rabbits, this story could be at least 20 chapters shorter without all the sex lol. I'm not saying it was bad, the story was really good, but the pacing kinda fell off at the end and the ending was kinda weak, I mean it was kinda sweet, but it just seemed like a weird way to end it.
The story was really good for the first half, pacing wise, then all they did was go at it like rabbits, this story could be at least 20 chapters shorter without all the sex lol. I'm not saying it was bad, the story was really good, but the pacing kinda fell off at the end and the ending was kinda weak, I mean it was kinda sweet, but it just seemed like a weird way to end it.