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Its a quick read what did you expect lol, its just a quick come and go thing. The mc is plain though I agree, I do feel like if it were expanded and he suffers so much more it would be way better though. It’s probably something written for fun so no need to take it so deeply blud
Wow this was spectacularly bad and extremely underwhelming, especially for something that had such a good concept. First of all, did we all read the same thing, I hated the personality of the main character. In fact, I tend to hate any character that has those little dog teeth. I don’t know how to describe it, but it’s the little teeth that poke out. They just tend to fall in the realm of characters that I really don’t like, such a good opportunity squandered like what even was the point of this story cause it definitely wasn’t for smut most of the story past in a time skip and the entire thing was just him really really not wanting to be there and the smut scenes weren’t even that good and the love interest basically had no personality, like I get that It was four chapters but it’s best the story hadn’t been written at all. I can’t believe this is number one recommended on this website right now.