My heart and mind have become a roller coasters of emotions. This story has had me in a chokehold for so many years. I will like to start of with my great appreciation toward the author for creating this wonderful manga it truly has a beautiful story like and no use points because its BL(yay). The author is very skilled and talented and drawing art makes one enjoy the story to its full potential. Now it is time!!! For my critiques involving the story line and developments. (Before I begin this part I will like to express the rage and burn in my heart I feel in whenever I even think about mafu and yukis relationship idk I just really hate it I don’t like them together at all. I’m an Ritsu supporter all the way. I know that they are not in any kind of competition but my inferior self makes me believe they are.) I am fully aware that mafu and yukis relationship is a crucial part of the story line and I order for the reader to understand that the flashbacks had not hit hard. Which is exactly what the author did by giving them mafu and yuki lots of big and beautiful panales of just them selfs. Again to express the depth of their relationship. But I fear that what the author failed to do is give the same treatment toward the main couple’s love story. Which sadly gave the certain gay loving sex thirsty audience a bad in take on mafu and Ritsu relationship. I know that is not the only reason and I could comprehend others on why they prefer mafu and yuki’s relationship maybe it’s because they prefer a more dominant and assertive tops to each their own yk. Let’s slowly start another topic k? Well TF happened in 10 years what is it with the time skip. I want to now how we got here like when did MAfu and Ritsu start living together and my is he still a “supporter” in Hiragis band. Also what did Given do after debut where is their success. Did the author just give she should express there ideas for not just leave me in the dark about everything I need to know exactly what happened. Yet I am afraid that that time will never come to pass the time where I get the happy ending with Givens success.
My heart and mind have become a roller coasters of emotions. This story has had me in a chokehold for so many years. I will like to start of with my great appreciation toward the author for creating this wonderful manga it truly has a beautiful story like and no use points because its BL(yay). The author is very skilled and talented and drawing art makes one enjoy the story to its full potential.
Now it is time!!! For my critiques involving the story line and developments. (Before I begin this part I will like to express the rage and burn in my heart I feel in whenever I even think about mafu and yukis relationship idk I just really hate it I don’t like them together at all. I’m an Ritsu supporter all the way. I know that they are not in any kind of competition but my inferior self makes me believe they are.) I am fully aware that mafu and yukis relationship is a crucial part of the story line and I order for the reader to understand that the flashbacks had not hit hard. Which is exactly what the author did by giving them mafu and yuki lots of big and beautiful panales of just them selfs. Again to express the depth of their relationship. But I fear that what the author failed to do is give the same treatment toward the main couple’s love story. Which sadly gave the certain gay loving sex thirsty audience a bad in take on mafu and Ritsu relationship. I know that is not the only reason and I could comprehend others on why they prefer mafu and yuki’s relationship maybe it’s because they prefer a more dominant and assertive tops to each their own yk.
Let’s slowly start another topic k? Well TF happened in 10 years what is it with the time skip. I want to now how we got here like when did MAfu and Ritsu start living together and my is he still a “supporter” in Hiragis band. Also what did Given do after debut where is their success. Did the author just give she should express there ideas for not just leave me in the dark about everything I need to know exactly what happened. Yet I am afraid that that time will never come to pass the time where I get the happy ending with Givens success.