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I understand your complaints, When I start this project, I do know that I'm not that strong in the story department, so I decided to just play it safe in term of storywriting.
Thank you for giving my work a try though! ^ ^
I already seen this manga was similar to other mangas. Story itself are just staged and very easy to predict.
It just get bored when she fought 1st one ease like playing around in the playpark. It just way too fast with this story and should be cut to 30-40 pages per chaptwr rather than 90 pages with 20 pages rest of them.
Sorry, but I really didnt like it at all since author itself less creative to making a story since it is fast paced rather than slow paced but getting stronger after story progress.