Like, it’s an enjoyable read all things considered.
But even if I’m enjoying it, I can’t deny how dumb some story parts are
Like, some moments start to come across as clever or line up nicely; and then there are moments like when her father finds them at the manor. Like, girl, even if it’s takes time for info to get back to your old house, why are you surprised he found out where you were??? You had an extremely dramatic and public marriage announcement with your real name! How did you not plan for this lol
But again, idk why, but I’m still enjoying the ride regardless
Like, it’s an enjoyable read all things considered.
But even if I’m enjoying it, I can’t deny how dumb some story parts are
Like, some moments start to come across as clever or line up nicely; and then there are moments like when her father finds them at the manor.
Like, girl, even if it’s takes time for info to get back to your old house, why are you surprised he found out where you were??? You had an extremely dramatic and public marriage announcement with your real name! How did you not plan for this lol
But again, idk why, but I’m still enjoying the ride regardless