Responses
Generic plot, had quite a few plot holes and for a name verse story there wasn’t enough emphasis on that aspect of it. There was a moment where I completely forgot that was even apart of the story. However, I still finished it, it’s a nice story even though it could improve in some aspects. Overall it wasn’t anything wow, or spectacular it was just okay.
(Also, usually gangster ML’s get super with the MC so I wind up disliking them but other than like 1-2 chapters where he was more forceful than I would have liked, he was pretty good to the MC.)
Touch up is so good I don't understand why this didn't get 9.0+ like I love how Sawol is more expressive oh his emotion now, my boy is suffering for years and now finally how to love someone himself and someone else They have a chibi look now too, so cuteee. The art gets better too! There are more color, and their movement is not awkward anymore. The development of the characters and the art and the story is amazing