I think the author meant to make it short and sweet so this is what happened. Tbh, I really like it and I think it’s a great short story. Of course I have read better but this is still good and I don’t consider it bad at all.
I know people don’t feel resolved because there wasn’t as much groveling, their love was fast, we don’t get closure in that side villain coworker, or the grandpa or the “uncle-ex husband” but tbh, it’s also realistic because….why would you be in contact with people like that? A grandpa who admits he doesn’t truly care about his own grandkid and a selfish, abusive uncle who stresses out both parents?
I really love how the MC stood up for himself and established himself as the parent and told the grandpa if he was such a better parent, then why are his sons the way they are, pot meet kettle. I really love that and you don’t see that often.
And then, I really love how the couple communicates with each other and they keep their promises, they don’t get swayed by others even if the other person may be right, both of them said “we promised to believe in each other, we already made a deal with each other so for good or bad, others are irrelevant” and that’s how it should be, because if not then The ML should’ve never pursued MC again, and MC should’ve kept hiding. But because they weren’t willing to back down and don’t want to regret, they stood firm together.
I think the author meant to make it short and sweet so this is what happened. Tbh, I really like it and I think it’s a great short story. Of course I have read better but this is still good and I don’t consider it bad at all.
I know people don’t feel resolved because there wasn’t as much groveling, their love was fast, we don’t get closure in that side villain coworker, or the grandpa or the “uncle-ex husband” but tbh, it’s also realistic because….why would you be in contact with people like that? A grandpa who admits he doesn’t truly care about his own grandkid and a selfish, abusive uncle who stresses out both parents?
I really love how the MC stood up for himself and established himself as the parent and told the grandpa if he was such a better parent, then why are his sons the way they are, pot meet kettle. I really love that and you don’t see that often.
And then, I really love how the couple communicates with each other and they keep their promises, they don’t get swayed by others even if the other person may be right, both of them said “we promised to believe in each other, we already made a deal with each other so for good or bad, others are irrelevant” and that’s how it should be, because if not then The ML should’ve never pursued MC again, and MC should’ve kept hiding. But because they weren’t willing to back down and don’t want to regret, they stood firm together.