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I thought only i noticed that shit. Yeah you're right they gotta make the transitions more smooth
Thank God! I really do like the story, so hopefully the team makes the scenes flow better.
beta
Am I the only one who finds how annoying the scene cut offs are? Like…there’s no aftermath or continuation to certain scenes which kind of ruins the plot. Like them making out at the end? Yeah well, next topic next chapter. Then them having sex, well it just ended cause now she’s having an internal thought about their relationship like?? Can we finish the scene to where it makes sense please?
Ik they need to change it, but there’s hardly any good conclusion to some of these scenes.