I feel like a lot of the dialogue overall could be cut down. Especially all the article jargon. I’m all for a bit of a build up but It’s like the author wants to waste the chapter beating around the bush instead of getting straight to the point.
I feel like a lot of the dialogue overall could be cut down. Especially all the article jargon. I’m all for a bit of a build up but It’s like the author wants to waste the chapter beating around the bush instead of getting straight to the point.