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Unfortunately, the novel is good. It's not the author's fault, the artist is just rushing the work, skipping some of the details. Artist doesn't know how to properly portray the story. They really should just stop and change the artist.
Yeah, I think this is a future DNF. The author doesn't even know what he wants and the story progresses too quickly and not quickly enough at the same time. There is not enough world building, and the tiny amount that there is doesn't even justify 16 chapters. He is quickly becoming a Gary Stu.