The story would've tasted sweeter without the smut.....or maybe with a minimal- artistic thingy rather than a descriptive one. Both the story telling and the art style has that kind vibe, ya know?
Tbh I kinda agree, I feel like there’s an innocence to this part of the story in particular that doesn’t lend itself to explicit smut. I’d rather the next chapter open with them in the afterglow.
The story would've tasted sweeter without the smut.....or maybe with a minimal- artistic thingy rather than a descriptive one.
Both the story telling and the art style has that kind vibe, ya know?