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I think it's fine for what it's trying to get across. I don't think the author was aiming for this to be a psychological thriller like those were...
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I think it's fine for what it's trying to get across. I don't think the author was aiming for this to be a psychological thriller like those were...
This author could take a lesson from Paraiso/Harada's "Mienai Kusari," Killer Whale's "Warehouse," Im Aiju's "Hogu Hagyeongsu," & Koogi's "Killing Stalking" on how to do psychological captive yaoi properly. This was just too fluffy & lacked any sense of drama or fear.