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Exactly, 4 chapters and only 10% of them happen in the current setting. Im not saying its hard to follow but its not a great way of presenting information to just dump it all in the begining, these thing should have pasing. Then again, this is just a silly bl but im just saying, pick a date and try to stay in it for like 1 chapter

I like the setting and characters but BOY the timeline isnt timelining, we going bak and forth and bak and forth. Stay in the present for like 1 ch ma ghawd