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Imno1 July 26, 2025 3:29 am

I’m so close to dropping ts All they do is talk and talk, that’s not even really the problem, it’s the fact that its characters I don’t even care about that keep taking up whole chapters

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    Cheeseburger July 26, 2025 3:31 am

    It's what they call "Well written" It's probably your first time hearing that.

    ghost July 26, 2025 3:44 am

    Oh darling you arent ready for this typa shi

    Imno1 July 26, 2025 3:47 am
    It's what they call "Well written" It's probably your first time hearing that. Cheeseburger

    Oh…ok

    Imno1 July 26, 2025 3:48 am
    Oh darling you arent ready for this typa shi ghost

    I’m not actually going to drop it. I just don’t like some of the characters

    Bearsnbees July 26, 2025 4:47 am

    well drop it then, you’re looking for a faster paced and condensed story. All of these characters serve purposes to move the plot forward. And this story is extremely plot heavy with a slower pace, so things like frustration and suspense can be built and leave an even larger impact on the reader. But if you are looking for a quick dopamine kick you should find something suited to your taste, this is just what you prefer and the plot and writing holds no real fault in that.

    xennoe July 26, 2025 4:56 am
    It's what they call "Well written" It's probably your first time hearing that. Cheeseburger

    right, like why are they upset because the story actually has well thought-out plot, world-building, and no plot holes? like please be so fr

    Imno1 July 26, 2025 5:09 am
    well drop it then, you’re looking for a faster paced and condensed story. All of these characters serve purposes to move the plot forward. And this story is extremely plot heavy with a slower pace, so things ... Bearsnbees

    It’s really not that serious. All I’m saying is I just read a whole chapter and we didn’t even see the main characters. Like I just want to know what happened to Abel, if he’s okay, things like that. I’ll continue the story cause like a lot of people have said already it’s well written, I just want to know about other characters as well. You know?