the ending was rushed leaving me disappointed I wanted more depth to it. the main character had very little development in what could have been a brilliant story. I feel that there were too many characters for such a short story and the multiple subplots only hindered the progress. There was no real growth at all. This story promised alot but ultimately failed to deliver ...
the ending was rushed leaving me disappointed
I wanted more depth to it. the main character had very little development in what could have been a brilliant story. I feel that there were too many characters for such a short story and the multiple subplots only hindered the progress. There was no real growth at all. This story promised alot but ultimately failed to deliver ...