I like the story because they're cute but some parts are confusing as hell. As a matter of fact, I've just read past through them and not minding to not get confused any further, LOL.
We read the same thing but there's no confusing thing for me, maybe you should try reading and not just scroll, it improves reading comprehension
The thing is, there are. Not because they are minor or subtle, don't mean there aren't. "Confusing" is not always about reading comprehension but about cohesion. Maybe you should know how to dissect first before commenting. ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭ It'll help with attitude.
I like the story because they're cute but some parts are confusing as hell. As a matter of fact, I've just read past through them and not minding to not get confused any further, LOL.