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I'm not satisfied with the story. I feel like the romance between them could've been devel...

Ireadanything October 19, 2025 1:11 pm

I'm not satisfied with the story. I feel like the romance between them could've been developed more. It all seemed too suddent. The seme was a pushover and the uke is kind of annoying for many reasons. He has attachment issues. I was baffled when he said he cancelled looking for apartment coz he misunderstood when seme said he'd stay with him. He was pushy. I almost feel like the seme just stayed with him coz they had sex plus he's also unstable from his divorce.

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    J713D March 25, 2026 4:40 am

    Ikr! I didn't like it that much... I feel like the story wasn't that good, couldn't connect with them and wasn't that romantic. There's potential if author takes out their first encounter (annoying the way they just did it; uke kinda manipulating or just pushing and seme just accepting like nothing) the uke personality wasn't the best either since he wasn't cute cause mostly he's pushy and kinda manipulating the situation...and since they didn't create a connection seme just missing him or trying to find him didn't feel organic tbh
    I wish author would developed better way the story and the story with uke dad too (There's a little potential in the whole story!)
    Up until now my least favorite from this author (the only one I didn't read yet is "Pink heart jam"x2)