first of all, dojin practically ed jooha. u mean to tell me that him, sexually assaulting jooha justifies his feelings of being abandoned and forgotten? bitch no. there must be some kind of redemption arc somewhere and there ain't it. and jooha, why the fuck would you even forgive that man immediately?
second, it's too short and there are lots of things that should've been added. was there a relationship between them other than when dojin kissed jooha when the latter was hospitalized.
third, this is trash. for a short story, it's good if you're into ing with no redemption arc and where the uke just forgive the seme even when the seme did a lot of bad things to the uke.
(i mean they could've talked it out. but then again, dojin is a fuckin' psycho).
this is a 1/10 for me ngl. i stopped at chapter 7 then went to see the ending and i was disappointed but not surprised with the ending. kinda cliché too. anyway, reading it is up to you.
first of all, dojin practically ed jooha. u mean to tell me that him, sexually assaulting jooha justifies his feelings of being abandoned and forgotten? bitch no. there must be some kind of redemption arc somewhere and there ain't it. and jooha, why the fuck would you even forgive that man immediately?
second, it's too short and there are lots of things that should've been added. was there a relationship between them other than when dojin kissed jooha when the latter was hospitalized.
third, this is trash. for a short story, it's good if you're into ing with no redemption arc and where the uke just forgive the seme even when the seme did a lot of bad things to the uke.
(i mean they could've talked it out. but then again, dojin is a fuckin' psycho).
this is a 1/10 for me ngl. i stopped at chapter 7 then went to see the ending and i was disappointed but not surprised with the ending. kinda cliché too. anyway, reading it is up to you.