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yeah - the earlier chapters have a cleaner, more finished look. Either they're behind schedule and don't have time to clean things up, OR since these chapters arent very erotic...they just don't want to clean it up. In the end...I'm still reading it no matter how awkward the storyline gets! I'm in way too deep to stop now.

Now, unless i need my eyes & brain tested, wtf is up with the change in drawing