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Narration all over the place

rameniiii November 6, 2025 5:41 am

Like we’re having flashback to present day back to flashback 1 and 2 it’s just very confusing. To top it off, the scenes drag on a little too long. The story isn’t bad, but I’m sure the novel is better

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    November 7, 2025 5:37 pm

    Yeah it takes me a good minute to register the time change