It's okay but the FL is giving y/n. It's lame how the only reason she has an eye for art and inventions is because she's from the future, but we're suppose to be impressed as readers? She's also so clueless and the pacing of her uncovering why the story changed is too slow. In nearly 50 chapters, all she has done so far is make a list of things that have changed. It feels like the author has forgotten about it. She's also frustrating cause she knows Edwin is destined to be poisoned, but still believes he and og FL should end up together? What about her sister and William? She's honestly a fool
The ML too, he truly believes his life was written out for him and he had no choice, but is judgemental of other characters because of their past lives. There's no consideration from him that everyone was written to be like that and also had no free will? It's an obvious plot hole that isn't being addressed.
It's okay but the FL is giving y/n. It's lame how the only reason she has an eye for art and inventions is because she's from the future, but we're suppose to be impressed as readers? She's also so clueless and the pacing of her uncovering why the story changed is too slow. In nearly 50 chapters, all she has done so far is make a list of things that have changed. It feels like the author has forgotten about it. She's also frustrating cause she knows Edwin is destined to be poisoned, but still believes he and og FL should end up together? What about her sister and William? She's honestly a fool
The ML too, he truly believes his life was written out for him and he had no choice, but is judgemental of other characters because of their past lives. There's no consideration from him that everyone was written to be like that and also had no free will? It's an obvious plot hole that isn't being addressed.