The point was the fight.... and the stubbornness.... right..... Maaaaaaan the story drifted way too much, how did we end up with a dude confessing and being frustrated at the seme???? Wasn't this PRECISELY to show him he's not as mature and he does love deeply??? Why... *rubs forehead* You know, as a writer myself I get it, sometimes the stories get out of hand and characters guide the plot to somewhere you weren't expecting... but to be honest this was ridiculous, this seems like the author never used the brakes, not even once. She never stopped and contemplated "is this going the right direction?" I can't even enjoy their reconciliation, it feels empty and pointless. *Sigh*
The point was the fight.... and the stubbornness.... right.....
Maaaaaaan the story drifted way too much, how did we end up with a dude confessing and being frustrated at the seme???? Wasn't this PRECISELY to show him he's not as mature and he does love deeply??? Why... *rubs forehead* You know, as a writer myself I get it, sometimes the stories get out of hand and characters guide the plot to somewhere you weren't expecting... but to be honest this was ridiculous, this seems like the author never used the brakes, not even once. She never stopped and contemplated "is this going the right direction?"
I can't even enjoy their reconciliation, it feels empty and pointless.
*Sigh*