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Bruh I lowkey agree I liked the characters fs and I think the dialogue is usually funny but when they start getting intimate, the dialogue becomes super cringey. The story was ok
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Bruh I lowkey agree I liked the characters fs and I think the dialogue is usually funny but when they start getting intimate, the dialogue becomes super cringey. The story was ok
the story itself is interesting but the dialogue is very cringy and the way characters are introduced is too much tell and not showing but its an easy read.