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I get the plot. The problem is the pacing. Like going through five stages of grief in a minute.
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I get the plot. The problem is the pacing. Like going through five stages of grief in a minute.
I’m genuinely tying to give it a chance but the plot just makes not sense and the two main characters are like sims. They roll a dice and say whatever comes out first. Like their interactions just makes no sense. Maybe theirs some context the reader is missing but regardless it doesn’t make the writing any less ass.
It’s so heartbreaking when good art is wasted of people who can’t write for shit