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Pacing feels off!

Lio December 19, 2025 4:19 pm

Something feels off about this story, I think it's the pacing and flow of one event to the other, like you are just thrown from one scenario to the other without much depth of the last scenario! I love the watercolor artstyle though

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    IMPOSTER January 2, 2026 7:39 am

    I think that’s because there’s some missing panels I think