Chat..do you think i should read this?

I would let it marinate a bit more. It's a very plot-heavy bl and my experience with those is that the more chapter out the better. Easier to keep track of the story when you have a more solid, fleshed out start.

I have had to re-read this like... 4 times at this point because I started too early considering my awful memory.

Okay! Tysmm