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Personally i enjoyed it. Story and characters are good. Some face expressions could be better and ending parts seems rushed but i love it.
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Personally i enjoyed it. Story and characters are good. Some face expressions could be better and ending parts seems rushed but i love it.
Is this actually worth reading? It looks very bad at first glance. It's also super long and i don't wanna waste my time if it's like the first chapter..