Reading the end felt like just reading it to finish the story... The part about the. MC's grandpa felt sudden. It was like "Oh yeah he has a grandpa, i almost forgot so hold on let me add some sob story to finish it with his family." Then all became rushed and sudden. Oh well... This is just me no offense intended.
Reading the end felt like just reading it to finish the story... The part about the. MC's grandpa felt sudden. It was like "Oh yeah he has a grandpa, i almost forgot so hold on let me add some sob story to finish it with his family." Then all became rushed and sudden. Oh well... This is just me no offense intended.