I think this was definitely supposed to be shorter and maybe the author saw how much love it was getting and decided to lengthen it a bit, which i believe made it into was it is. It’s not bad at all i actually loved it, but it seems the plot was forced and so left a lot of loose ends, upon first read u wont notice it but when u reread it, you’ll definitely be like “hmm, wonder what he brought to this story”. Art was absolutely amazing tho!
I think this was definitely supposed to be shorter and maybe the author saw how much love it was getting and decided to lengthen it a bit, which i believe made it into was it is. It’s not bad at all i actually loved it, but it seems the plot was forced and so left a lot of loose ends, upon first read u wont notice it but when u reread it, you’ll definitely be like “hmm, wonder what he brought to this story”. Art was absolutely amazing tho!