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The premise and start was really good and well-written but it kind of got bland at the end...

Yohrou January 2, 2026 3:41 pm

The premise and start was really good and well-written but it kind of got bland at the end, the final fight scene also suckeddd, it was a bit of a let-down
But overall, art is good, story checks out overall, but I feel like there's something missing in the story, is it just me? Like genuinely it feels incomplete...

Pacing was honestly so quick thoughhhgh, I think it's the reason as to why some people are conflicted on whether they should have gotten into a relationship or not. Imo it's okay, they both did each other wrong in a way, but I still also think that the ML truly did go too far at the start, and that the FL was so freaking regretful,, but like for what????

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    Yohrou January 2, 2026 3:46 pm

    + ml's actions (killing her) are reasonable; I mean first kill, okay valid, nobody knew anything. The kills after that are debatable,, but the thing is she doesn't remember her deaths all that well, and he was clearly grieving over his family, so imagine his pain when she turns back time, because then he has to die TWICE (arrow, seal) in every life of hers, and he vividly remembers that.