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ure right tho, like we dont get to see what makes diego different from matthew, only how similar they look. like even after jayden reassures that it's diego he loves, i still can help but feel like im not totally convinced
I feel like the villian was right tho( Daniel). I wanted them to fall in love, but they just looked, say ,, hi'' , kissed, fucked , and boom - in love. It's missing some development instead of the sex scenes , to have maybe some cool back to back comparison, a memory of Matthew and some dialogue and then a talk with Diego on coffee or something, where they click on many things that Jayden and Matthew didnt or that made them very distinctly different! And from what it was shown, it's genuinely like as Daniel describes it. Its funny because I know for sure the author meant this moment to show us the reader that look, Daniel is manipulating Jayden etc. , but instead Daniel spoke facts and Jayden responses had no ground nor context to make sense.
Still a cute short story, if only it didnt happen like this
P.S. my personal IRL BL situation happen quite similar to them ,so maybe I shouldn't judge too much T_T