Well said
I agree that the execution was lacking quite the bit
But the art tried to make up for it but it was not quite there you know
I hope we get to get there thoughts explained/worded in the coming chapter to make up for it
tho it's quite unlike that it WILL happen cause the author chooses the usually not taken parth and then barely manages to get at the end of it
Totally agree with you!
I’m having trouble understanding what the author is trying to achieve by doing this…
I do hope the next upcoming chapters do make up for it but like you said, I also believe it’s not very likely. And if they do, it won’t be till the very end of the season or next season with the way things are going now.
And after this latest chapter, they’d have to hit the ground running to make up for it. They are looking at least 5 chapters missed of emotional and mental development. They’ll have to catch up with where the readers are in the story.
Sooooooooooo, obvi this is pretty much a semi rape scene WHICH it wasn’t suppose to be. HOWEVER, I feel given the importance of this latest chapter, it was definitely lacking in depth and substance. I mean, he’s saving his friend. He is putting himself on the line for his friend. I feel capturing that, the sexually scene was and is lacking. It’s read as a rape scene but truthfully, it isn’t suppose to be a rape scene but a choice in which he gives away his freedom to save his friend by laying with Mr.Redhead.
What was suppose to look like a moment between his fear for his friend and his feelings for the redhead; just read as a basic rape tale… *sighs* Truthfully, for something I was waiting on only just disappointed me. Reading the story, I see the plot. There are complicated feelings there which are to be explored and fought for. But we literally reached a fever pitch in the story and this is how it’s delivered and handled??
I mean, truthfully—do this chapter over. This isn’t how a fever pitch moment is suppose to be told. It’s suppose to be detailed with minor complicated feelings explored between him and redhead.
Latest chapter most likely was rushed, gave little thought to what the moment required, half baked, and it almost felt like the author of this tragic tale doesn’t even know what they want these characters to explore. You can’t give complicated emotions and feelings and not have the characters exploring them in the moment or feel some way about the decisions they are making. This shouldn’t have been a rape scene. It should have been a scene where redhead finally gets to lay with his LI but feel a sense of guilt and anger for how they got there. A moment of forced and gentleness. A hurricane of emotions was suppose to take place in this moment of sexual intimacy for the first time. I also feel if he is saving his friend, there should have been some emotional mention of that and the disconnect he feels because this isn’t how he wished things to have gone.
None of that was there. It was read as right up rape—and even worse, didn’t even deliver properly on that either. Like why? (●￣(ｴ)￣●)